00:01 There's at least one extra space between "Mildian" and "Battle". It seems to let Shiki and Rebecca(?) show through, so maybe you did it on purpose.
00:05 "Colosseum?" Damn it, you used the British English spelling last episode ("coliseum") and I wanted to mention it as an error but wasn't sure if it would count as one. Now you're using the other form (that I'm more used to seeing). Whatever you do, you should probably make it match in both episodes at least when you do a batch.
01:43 there's a colon instead of a quotation mark
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