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@Moses35i You're Welcome

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You're welcome Guys!! 〜(￣▽￣〜)

I'm going to point out some things I wasn't pointing out in previous corrections, related to how sentences spanning multiple screens of text are handled. If you agree it looks better with the changes, it's worth going back to check over previous episodes as well. 02:19, 02:21, I'd add a comma after "weird", and then lowercase "But" in the next line. 02:27 missing a period 02:29 missing a period 02:34 similar to the first lines I pointed out, I'd end this line with a comma and not capitalize the start of the next line. 02:37 in addition to the above change, there's a missing period 02:48 missing period 02:56 missing period 03:08 missing period 03:17 missing period 03:30 missing period 03:31 missing period 03:42 missing period 03:53 missing period 03:56 missing period 05:02 "Blaumro" sounds wrong to me (sounds more like "Blamuro"), but I'm guessing it was intentional since that's apparently used in an official english translation. 05:08 add comma to the end 05:12 lowercase the "A", add a period 05:47 missing period 05:53 missing period 06:45 "vampire," this comma doesn't belong 07:33 missing period 07:44 missing period 08:10 missing period 08:13 add a comma to the end 08:14 missing period 08:22 add comma after "Yeah" 08:32 missing period 08:59 missing period 09:38 missing period 09:54 missing period 10:06 missing period 10:12 "it's" -> "its" 10:19 "it's" -> "its" 10:34 missing period To be continued because this was too long for one post...

11:23 "your your" -> "your", add a comma after "Goldva-sama" 12:30 missing period 12:46 missing period 13:10 missing period 13:26 missing period 13:40 missing period 13:44 "But" is in the middle of a sentence and should be lowercase here 13:49 missing period 13:52 missing period 14:10 add an apostrophe before "cause" ('cause) 14:21 missing period 14:50 missing period 14:51 missing period 15:06 missing period 15:27 missing period 15:29 missing period 16:03 missing period or maybe a comma at the end 16:09 missing period 16:12 add a comma after "Vlad" 16:21 missing period 16:33 missing period 17:29 "are" -> "were" to match the tense of the previous line 17:36 missing period 17:49 missing period 18:09 missing period 18:13 missing period 18:32 missing period 18:40 "was" -> "were" (because "right and wrong" = multiple things) 18:49 this should probably be two sentences, broken up where the comma is 18:56 I'd add a comma after "Hehehe", and then there's a missing period as well 19:09 "if" -> "is", also missing period 19:20 missing period 20:11 missing period 20:25 I feel like the three words here should be punctuated, either comma separated or maybe all with an exclamation point 20:41 missing period 20:47 missing period 20:56 missing period 21:08 "ghost enslaving" -> "ghost-enslaving" 21:22 missing period 21:39 "would be" -> "were" 22:00 missing period 22:04 add a comma to the end 22:09 lowercase the "Or" at the start That took a lot longer than usual, but a comment I saw on the episode 18 upload pointed out the missing periods and I decided it was probably worth noting them.